by BlueDreams
beautiful write through inspiring....becky, well done.. god bless your heart, take care....bert. |
The poem expressed a feeeling not often shared/ 'My God... my God... Why have you forsaken me? then it seems as though the poem came through you rather than from you/ God reasssuring you He has not forsaken you. I could almost hear music in the backgroung as I read this sincere prayer |
by Ann Stareyes
Becky, Beautiful prayer!!!! Sometimes we all can get down and feel this way. But we always find with a little time, God surely want let us down. He will help us get through. This prayer touched my heart more than you know. Take care and you will be in my prayers, hugs, love, Ann |
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow, Becky! This is an amazingly uplifting poem! You have such wonderful insight and a beautiful heart! The faith and love conveyed in this is breathtaking! |
Hey, I'm not a strong christian but i believe, I so often turn my back on God and try and take control over things i can't. You made me realize that God is always there for me, and that maybe I need to Just trust as you said.. This poem is awsome, keep up.. |
Great poem its really good |
by Chelsey
*Tear*..It makes me so very very proud when i read poems like this Becky..I love the fact that you let the devil know he didnt win...Problems? Ohh my dear friend i wish i didnt read that you have been depressed..You one of the greatest people Becky and you should not have to feel like that..Just like you said you can't make it without Jesus by your side..i know I can't either...so getting depressed just makes the devil happier then ever..I know you can stay strong and I know you can hang in there!! My love is with you always..this was such a beautiful prayer!! |
I have to thank you for your lovely comment on one of my poems, so... cheers. and i like this, even though I'm not religious. Think it rocks. good stuff. |
very inspiring and well written. I loved it. |
by Jay27
What to say about something like this? I guess all I can say is I envy you. I used to believe as you do, though science books have put too many questions in my head now and joined forces with my weak character to rob me of my God. It's a sad tradeoff really, you read volumes on science and theories and it gives you some answers, and adds to your questions. What are you left with? A hole in your life, still questions unanswered and no where to turn. |
by Just Lucy
wow i really loved this, poem, i am glad you trust god again, and that poem was so powerful and brilliantly set out, great work becky, keep it up |
by Marjan
really beautiful. I love God too. |
by Gemma Sinead Hayward
*snort* |
by Pilar
This poem is so inspiring. great work. what else can i say? ^^ |
by Rachel RTVW
It always helps to get it out when feeling depressed if by talking to a friend or loved one or as you did to write it in a beautiful poem. Nicely done. |
I have never heard of a prayer that hasn't |