wow, ur a very creative writer i love to read ur poems keep up the great work! l8ter daze
lots of luv <3
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Really emotional and expressive. You've really pinned the point here, that's hard to do if you also want to be expressive and deepen it. You have done both very nicely. 5/5.

Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)