by Naima Jun 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This guy needed help |
by kiesha
I thought that was good. I don't know what it's like to have a stalker, but I'm sure I would be a little freaked out too. Keep writing! Take care. |
by Sierra Rae
I liked the poem and the words fit together perfectly...but the rhythm changes a few times in the poem...you might try breaking it up into stanza's because it makes it a little easier to read...and a few spelling errors but not that big of a deal. Great Job I'm lovin your poems, |
by Naima
Ok, thanx!!!It's about Damien!!! So thanx for the feedback!!!! |
by Naima
Thanx you all!!!! |
by Darien
PS. i love your pic.. |