That is quite sad, I must say. Not the poem itself, the story. The poem was written very well. Good job, and good luck!

Take care,
Renee

Wow....I can relate to that. They way you write and express it....anyone can. Loved it.

~*~Christina~*~

good rhyming. i like this poem

this is really sad, I think nearly everyone here can relate to that. Well done.
xxxxxx

Sad story of a lost friendship. that can be really hard. It sounds natural, not forced...like you're just talking to Kim...and it flows nicely. I like it a lot.

xxx

That was good...

Wow this is the second poem i loved and they were both 5'S! i hope you keep writing because you have a great talent

endings of friend ships are never fun. i'm sorry you had to go through this, i for one know what it's like to feel betried by a friend too. loved the ending. hope things are good now,

~PLP~ lil slam~

WOW! LOVD THIS! It flowed great and just amazing overall! Your very talented!
Much love...<3
~*hAiLy*~

Thank you for letting me read some of your work keep up the good work and keep smiling

Ouch that's harsh i liked this a lot i dont have any advice cause i think this was great 5/5

WOW!!...another great work form u!!
u've filled this one with emotions...it sound so true..n lovely..beautiful work....just so touching...u've penned it so well...so naturally...as though it comes from u r heart n u r letting yur poems flow into words..Great job!
5/5!
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