And i love you just the way you are! Great job, doll. 5/5

Awesome write, you are who you are and we love you that way....... great job

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

hehe great poem!:o) Strong and meaningful words..Excellent writting! Keep it up hun!
5outta5!
~Shannon

Wow, it hurt my eyes. Why in all caps? Ah well, doesn't take away from the great poem.

I really liked how you portrayed yourself in a poem. I've been wanting to write something like this (an "autobiographical poem") but I can't really seem to. I'm really complex! =)

Even though your poetry doesn't seem to rhyme much, it still has a brilliant flow and meter. Great job.

~Ciao Lipton

Awesome.....And always be proud of you are. Great job. hugs, love, Ann

wonderful poem! id just change one thing. the very last line, make it nothing more nothing less instead of nothing less nothing more cause in the beginning you said it that way

Wow.Excellent poem! you write so well...Thank you for your comment...As an answer to your question, that was the Hailie that was on this site. I known her for quite some time, she lives near me. It is a tragic thing that happened to her.

Excellent write!

great poem

Besides the caps, it was quite a wonderful poem, good job!

Sorry girl I am so SLOW!!..I saw I didnt comment on these poems...that is so unusual for me.*smacks herself in the head* LOL...Anyways this poem was WHOA!!!! OMG I LOVED IT!!!!! You describe yourself so well in this poem, and I love you for who you are, the person you described!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE poems like these espcially written by my role model!! :)...I love ya girl you are amazing!
Your bubba titta,
~Chelsey~

I love this poem..5/5 plz comment on my work..thanks