hey wow this is a good poem, awsome work, hope your ok, just made a poem dedicated to you, check it out i hope you like, once more great job on this. peace out God bless, much love

Nick

wow... angry, are we?

I know, not my best, Lu. I agree! Just trying a new form. And yes, Zac, I was a bit angry. :)

aww...that's good babe!

Nice poem. I remember having these exact feelings for my parents when I was younger. Nicely expressed:)