Last Note :.!.:

by Drop xdead gorgeous   Jun 12, 2005


Thoughts of suicide written on my face.
So Many thought that start to race.
I take my knife and cut so deep, as i watch my blood begin to seep.
One more cut and then another,
One more cut, deeper than the other.
I take that knife give it one last twist
Now its back to bed with a clenched fist

As i lie in bed,
My thoughts pace, while my hearts at race.
My Face burns, My eyes a cloudy mist
As the Blood trickles faster from my wrist
I look back on my life and think,
"Why Does It have To be like this?"

My Thoughts Stop.
And Finally Go away
I Know now there's nothing anyone can do or say
Tonight's the night, I take my life away.
This is my last suicide note,
Here i Go, I finally slit my throat............

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Quite good, the rhyming is a bit off, but othertahn that the stry is completely complet :P
    sad though... 4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Joey P

    WOW this poem really had me thinking of the times I was that close to giving up. I want 2 give up badly but something holds me back. who knows what it is. Anyway I just wanna tahnk u for the comment on my poem, I very much appreciate it, it ment alot. I jus want 2 say..... even though i want to give up doesnt mean there isnt any help for people that deal with these problems. So be strong and God will be there hanging on.

    God Bless

    P.S
    Keep up the great work.