WOW this poem really had me thinking of the times I was that close to giving up. I want 2 give up badly but something holds me back. who knows what it is. Anyway I just wanna tahnk u for the comment on my poem, I very much appreciate it, it ment alot. I jus want 2 say..... even though i want to give up doesnt mean there isnt any help for people that deal with these problems. So be strong and God will be there hanging on.

God Bless

P.S
Keep up the great work.

Quite good, the rhyming is a bit off, but othertahn that the stry is completely complet :P
sad though... 4/5