i actually like this one better than the other two. Major props to ya! =) 5/5

its creepy, dark, and beautiful all at the same time and you can see such a vivid image in your mind. This was an amazing poem!

Jess

this is so vivid in imagination its cool. it is defently worth reading :) keep up the good work.

-faithfulserenity

Hey! I loved this poem. Very creative. very well written.