interseting poem but i like it! v good.
keep up the gd work (and plz read some of my work if u have time) thnkx
sam xxxx

I enjoyed the vivid illusion you created with this poem. Your animated descriptions provided great imagery and drama. Very well done.

Now, here is a truly unusual set of coincidental circumstances. The subject of your poem is a train and an illusionary outlaw. I also composed a poem whose subject is a train and and illusionary outlaws. And the two poems are coming from two writers who share the same name. How extraordinary!

Best regards. --Lydia O.