great poem. try to get that happiness again and don't dwell on the bad things. I know thats harder done than said, but if you really try it works.
take care,
Renee

I love it. It's more dark than sad...but all the same it is really good...I feel low sometimes...I feel a lot of emotions. That's probably why I am so absorbed in writing and expressing what I feel. You do a good job expressing yourself here....

wow another good poem. 5/5 i think im gonna add you to my favorites...if thats ok

Yeah it's cool....thanks.

Original. Well written. I like.

i felt tah in my heart man. great job once again. you definately are asuperb writer.

That is awesome love the ryhme sceam...and the rythem. 5/5!

LISSA