Nice one - 'use those wings.........' That's what we all need to do in life. what seems like hell today, always mends and goes away. We just need to make the effort to rise above it. that's my interpretation of your poem.

My poem that you commented on wasn't about suicide. It was about an old lady passing away naturally, and how her things were just casually packed away.
It was fiction.

the poem is simple & short.. you're very creative & thoughtful.. 25/5