Ok, I think I'm lucky, because you just posted this, and then I was like. Wow, another amazing poem. You have a talent, so keep up the awesome work.

:) Darien

Hey this is great and it shows you are very talented. Keep it up - looking forward to reading more of yours. :)

Different from some of your other pieces, but in a positive way. This poems seemed to maintain good rhythm and flow throughout.

Keep Writing
Nici

I love it! dont change it at all!