that is one of the best that i have ever read
keep up the great work

awww this poem is sweet. i really like it, keep it going. im hear for youxoxo. love ya xxxxxxxx

thanks for your comment, i hope things get better too. This poem was great i could relate to it some what!! awsome poem youre a great writter keep it up.

Wow..that is really good and deep from the heart and that is how poems come out at their finest. I've been in situations like that before and I know how they feel..They are painfull but sometimes worth it and other times they arnt//Be careful..xox

rite u no i dont think it is rite coz he is alot older than you. but if u love him as wat you say you do then go for it. let him no how much you love him. i no he has a lot 2 lose but you are worth it all. if he cant see that then he isnt worth it at all.
Love ya
Calley XxX

another great poem you seem to get better all the time well i really enjoyed reading it jamesxxx

that is really good!!! probably one of the best things i've read! XoXo, Jennifer

So sad...and touching...we can't get what we want everytime...there's time when we are not meant to...this is fate...

I'm going through the same thing and i wish now that i never was with him so that i wouldn't feel this way keep strog girl u'll be alright!

OMG i feel the same i loved it it was really great!!!!!!!!!!5/5