Aweeesomme.. iahve opoems that relte to this..I love you and Suicidal Romance..oh and Sw33t Misery..check them otu and more thnxs..keep writign. LISSA

Good idea... don wori bout the spelling, emotion is wat counts! 4get the other peopls thauts... as long as u happy! k? :)

The poem is good if you knew how to spell it makes you look like a dumb ass wrighting like that

I think the poem has a good idea to it and that if you used english instead of the msn ways of writing. I think it is a bit disrespectful to write like that in a poem when your pouring your soul out here. And if you tried to find some other words that linked a bit better then it would improve it alot.
But good work honey,
and i understand how you are feeling..
love swe3t,
xxxxxxxxx

A lovely poem! A bit hard to understand, but it has real inspiration!

Not trying to be mean but learn how to spell.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.