by VampyraKi†Jun 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The thought of you leaving |
by Allison
I think that you could have added a little more tword the end, but besides that it was good. I really liked this one too. *5/5* |
by Emma
Wow. i like this poem i enjoyed reading, keep up the good work. |
by Loulou
Great poem i like it alot |
by xDryTearsx
Yea it was good but the rhyming thing you say you were trying not to be like anyone else but yea sorry to bust your bubble but i read a few poems from other people that were like that but whatever floats your goat i liked it anyways. |
by VampyraKiâ€
I did the rhyme different to catch people and not be the same as everyone else i was bored of the same type of rhymeing stuff so...yeah have a good day all |