this is very good.

The rhythm in this piece works well and it is refreshing to see a poem where the author realises that there is no need for forced rhyming.

Keep Writing
Nici

Your poems are very mysterious but captivating! Loved it 5*

The truth shall set you free...lol I like that!!!

Brilliance. I love it. Metaphorical and effective. I love your style.

xxx

Excellent poem! I t was very deep and flowed nicely