by Naima Jun 13, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
I hate you all |
by Darien
Very nice poem, I enjoyed it :) |
by Sierra Rae
I love the first two lines, "I hate you all, I love you still" that's really good...drew me in right from the start!! You have a few spelling mistakes and the rhythm is a little off, and the last line seems really drawn out...but other than that the poem is really good; very original. Keep up the great work, |
by Hurtingsoul
really really good and i mean it |
by Naima
Thanx!!! |