Thanx!!!

really really good and i mean it
keep it up its very good
take care
HS

I love the first two lines, "I hate you all, I love you still" that's really good...drew me in right from the start!! You have a few spelling mistakes and the rhythm is a little off, and the last line seems really drawn out...but other than that the poem is really good; very original. Keep up the great work,

xoxo-Sierra Rae

Very nice poem, I enjoyed it :)