Good, though not excellent. A few creative lines, but other than that, it's a bit unoriginal. Also, the rhyming lines should have better rhythm, meaning try to make them have the same nuber of syllables. I liked the title, though. 4/5.

hey i liked it!! thankyou so much for commenting on my poems..x x x

Cute poem. Thanks for your comments!
-Kate

OMG i totoalli love it.. its such a cute poem.. i mean the ways its written and stuff.. awesome job..thnx for the comments on mine