Tear stained face

Hey.. Excellent poem. Its really touching. I loved how your repeated that one line.. Awesome job, keep it up!
Bec xx

Heyyyy :) Great poem. Really powerful piece of writing. 5/5 Thanks so much for the comments on my poems. I really appreaciate it. Sorry I havent written much lately, I just cant seem to write anything half decent at the moment. I should have some more poems on here soon though. Thanks again, I really enjoy reading what you think about my writing :)

hey loved your poems and thanks for commenting on mine. read more if you like. thanks again it means a lot to me.

one word- powerful- ok more words that's really good and moving great job i'd change nothing about it awesome job

wow strong message. sad sad poem.
was very good tho.

Jacs
xxx