Damn you and you're good job at spreading sadness and grief through out the world...
Lol, so good and sad ;-; but it's awesome good job ^^
Keep up the good sad poemsness

I love this powerful poem
5/5
keep it up
xx

such a sad poem!!! very touching though

So sad. ;_;
Good poem!

Omg, this is so sad! I love it! Terrific write hun. 5/5!

Love much,
Tiff

:o omg...thats an amazing poem.. I usually don't read sad poems, but this was really good...
Thanx for commenting on my poem:)
Love,
Line

This is very good and i usually don't like non-rhyming poems but i really did like this one..keep up the good work k.

ttyl
Maddy

I usually dont like styles like this, but there is a first for everything and this definately was my first. I really loved it, you made me inspired to try a new style

very sad but well written

Heartrending story, but told very well. I like it.

xxx

wow thats really deep... i love it!! i hope ill be as good as you one day!! lol! thanx for checking my poems out and commenting on them!! im gonna be adding some new ones so be sure to check em' out sometime!! Best of luck! ~*~LiLⁿLiZ~*~

wow! very sad poem. it didnt have much rhyme tho

thats a very sad poem, I am sorry for your pain..

aw so sad, but so good, great poem!its really touching:)

wow strong message. sad sad poem.
was very good tho.

Jacs
xxx

one word- powerful- ok more words that's really good and moving great job i'd change nothing about it awesome job

hey loved your poems and thanks for commenting on mine. read more if you like. thanks again it means a lot to me.

Heyyyy :) Great poem. Really powerful piece of writing. 5/5 Thanks so much for the comments on my poems. I really appreaciate it. Sorry I havent written much lately, I just cant seem to write anything half decent at the moment. I should have some more poems on here soon though. Thanks again, I really enjoy reading what you think about my writing :)

Hey.. Excellent poem. Its really touching. I loved how your repeated that one line.. Awesome job, keep it up!
Bec xx