This is sad. But I like it.!....Well if this poem is concerning you maybe you should talk to your father about how u feel but if youre too scared you should just maybe give him this lovely poem and that he'll understand. I know this is not a poem column but I hope you take my advice!

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Nana

That is an incredible poem... you should read mine entitled 'No More' and comment. Keep up the good work.

thank you guys xxx

Very good, I almost cried... Because of totally different reasons about my dad. But still I want to hug him and he aint here.

I think you poem was very heart felt and great

Thank you everyone. xxx