by InMyWorld Jun 13, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Hey guys...i wrote this a very long ago but it had a lot of meaning to me. enjoy :) |
by Little Dot
That is a very deeply emotional poem. It's very well done with good rhythme and imagery. Keep up the good work. |
by Patrik
Good poem, but didn't really like the lines being long then getting shorter and shorter, that leads to less syllables per line and makes it a little un-even. |
by erikka baby
I love it. It's so full of emotion. Your very talented. Keep it up ♥ |
great job once again |
by Sarah Ann
WOw that was so interesting and powerful. excellent job. xxx |