i don't see many poems that are not from the 1st person perspective and thats what makes your poem diffrent and I like it great ending also..... 6.17 on the ronin 6.66 scale

that was really nice...i liked it.

It was unique, that is why I liked it. Excellent. xxx

great poem, i enjoyed it alot...you have great talent keep it up:)

that was good
to let you know i changed it around i really dodnt want it like that i just putit liek that till i found other words to use
love this

andrea

I can really relate to this song. I loved the flow. Your so awesome at writing, I just recently wrote my very first song, and I hope to get as good as you. Thanks for all your feedback, it means alot ♥

this was a beautiful poem. it could have been interpreted in many different ways because of the way you changed the mood of the poem. your an excellent poet. keep up the good work..

Aaah, soso. couldn't get any flow up, and in the beggining of the poem it feel as if you forgot to hit Enter to make a new line in a few place.

Best wishes,
Patrik

You have great imagery in this poem. I thought you did an excellent job expressing yourself through this poem.