Really, really like this one. It was extremely well done and...wow. I think we've all been there before. Love the first 2 stanzas, great job. 5/5 for sure.
<3 Stef

Good job Sara, my favorite part was --

'i try and be what you want
to be perfect in your eyes
but every time i look at you
i see her reflection
staring back at me'

Yeah hun, I know how you feel! Overall though, this poem was great.

Take care,
- Shell.

Thanks for the comments btw, it means alot to me :-D

that was so sad. it all fit together well...nice write. xxx

Wow.. awesome poem. It would drive me nuts if I knew that my man wanted someone else.. But i would still love him.. I know because i have been in the situation before. Anyways great job it had a nice flow and i loved the imagery. 5/5!

Loved the last stanza of this poem! It was very sad and full of true emotions! I can relate to this poem! Brooke~