you could call it a killers game. or smething like that. this was exquisetly done and deserves a 10 out of 5
~Freak~

that was soooo good i mean i could imagine the pain she had wen it happened and the fear and then all of it was just like wow thats all i can say is wow

Wow I love dark poems. It was long but worth the read. You painted a very detailed picture. Very Very good well written poem! Loved the idea and the unique way you wrote it. Take Care! Brooke~

Well written, frightening how you managed to portray both the victim and the murderer so well. Not too sure where you got the idea from :-l, but brilliantly written once again. xox

I loved this poem. Great job!!
With every word I could feel the victims fear and the murderer's passion for killing.
Absolutely wonderful write.
I'll be sure to check out some of your others.
Take care & God bless

omgosh. that was horrible. great emotion tho!

I can honestly say and im sure many will agree with me that this is a marvellous poem. First class. Some of the rhymes may not be just perfect but all the same it’s great. I like the idea you had off having one stanza of her thoughts and one of his. Brill work. Look forwards to reading more of your poems.

Wow! you had me hanging on every word. Never seen a poem from two points of views like that. Very unique idea. It worked well for you. Haunting. Loved. it.

plz don't hate me 4 saying this but that freaked me out 2 much i won't say anything more and i'm going to leave now

deep deep deep...wow ur talented this is another dark mysterious kinda poem..i love it keep writing

-angel-

Wow, that's looooooooong, but i can't take my eyes of it, you sure can write, it's nice on how you write those thought of the murderer and the victim, i loves the parts of the murderer especially.

Now will i be your next victim?
Luv ya,
your friend.

Waoh...this....was...the...SHIT! i loved it so much holy freak it was flippen awsome i loved loved loved it!! 5/5 please read my newest poem

Hey this was amazing and really interesting i loved it xxx

Spiffy. ^.^ Totaly spiffy.

Wow...
I loved this!!
I thought the last two stanzas had great impavt, they were very powerful.
There's a spelling mistake or two that needs to be fixed and I did think at times the flow was a little off, but apart from that I think you did a wonderful job on this.