One day...

You gave me the moon,
the stars in the sky,
you make me believe,
i could stand up and fly,
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You should capitalize i, other than that the beginning is very interesting, it proves that someone has effected your life in a good way

you make me feel,
im an angel from above,
an angel with wings,
your little white dove.
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These lines didn't really seem to go together for me, as I was reading it, it seemed like "above" and "dove" were forced poetry.

I wish you were here,
to hold me in your arms,
take me away,
and end all harm,
you're my world,
my whole entire life,
one day i hope,
to be your wife.

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The rest was well written, but you have to know everything does not have to rhyme, just let it flow 3/5