OMG WOW!!!!!!! Okay, tears on my cheeks :*(**** lol....wow, this is just...well, for one, it's absolutely brillliiaaannntttttt....secondly...it's so SAD omg....*sorry* lol. Wow. You're a freaking awessommeee writer hun. *makes room for you on my favorites* =D I love you. Lovely work...completely stunned...Great job...I hope it never happens to anyone either..such a sin =( there were like 3 verses that really, really hit me...I think this one the most cos I can relate..: |
by Rachael
That was really sweet....everyone should have a friend like you...you gave some very good advice...excellent job! |
by Natalie84
WHOA! Excellent write. I loved every single bit of it. Truly an amazing piece. :) |
Nice poem! It flowed very nicely! |
by Ann Stareyes
rolo, this was absolutely written so beautiful. A pleasure to read. Loved the flow and the wording.....superb. hugs, love, Ann |
by Alyssa
Hey this poem is really good. Good Job. |
by JJ
beautiful job! you're an amazing writer |
by MoNoMaNiA
your poem has a soul. keep up the good work. |
by Eibutsina
So true Rolo, life is a gift that can be taken from us at any given time, its so important to tell our loved ones how we feel about them, what they mean to us and how they have impacted on our lives. Great write I really enjoyed it! |
If only I told you everything that I felt, |
by Kymberly
That poem is so awsome...Keep it up , your good =D |
by miracle
It's so beautifull.. I get tears in my eyes |
by Kinkz89
awesome...that was a really good poem...Keep up the good work... |
by Lu
Awesome !!!!!!!is all I can say I'm speachless 5/5 |
That is such an amazing poem with such a heartfelt meaning*** I read this poem and it showed me to tell my best friend how im feeling, as shes going through a rough tym @ the mo, so thankz!!!! |
That is worded so well and so beautiful and meaningful... |
Wow this is great, it has a really good message. I love your style. |
This is a great poem with an invaluable meaning. Another great job. Well Done |
by JLT
Awwww, Britt! It's beautiful. It's so sad. :( It brought tears to my eyes. It also made me realize that i should tell my friends how much they mean to me more often... This is an amazing poem and it was written by the most awesomest Britt in the world! :) I love you. Keep writing or i'll beat you up! Hehe *huggles* |
OMG, Rolo!!!!!! I'm so glad that you recommended that I read this! you are an amazing poet! I really, really loved it! The flow was perfect and the rhymes were excellent!!!!! I'm adding you to my favorites!!!!! Great job!!!! |