by Treakle Jun 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I wish I could but I can't anymore |
by Becky drake
Listen to your insticnts.............great write, most of us write what is in our hearts, or at least in our minds, so if this is a true life poem, get out now, you said "your not quite right" in your poem, I know to many people who knew that and stayed and it became a nightmare....if this is not true life, you are a very good writer, and you captured the fear, in a subtle way....either way great work, thank you for your wonderful comments on mine, please read and comment on a few more if you have time...thanks love ya Becky |
by Anna
nice write hunny |