A very nice write. I liked the metaphoric way it was written, 'cause for me, as the reader, I can tell that you are not just talking about a flower and a caterpillar but also of true love. Another thing I really liked about this poem was that it is original and it didn't rhyme, like most poems do. Very good job. I must say, I can't find anything wrong with this poem, so all I can say is that it's a very nice write. Take care,
Dorotea