Hey whassup? =) I can see some of this as a song lol just needs to be a bit longer...but as a poem i like it. Do you have any special poems you'd like me to read? Peaces. //ari\\ and thanks for the comment, much appreciated. ^__^

thank you for the commit. and in sad to say it but yes that did really happen to me. and i wasnt even going out with the that did it ether. i was going out with someone eles. and when he did stop i still had to see him every day at school.
but ummm yea i loved this poem its really good keep up the good wrk.5/5

that really sad.. but its good and i like it.. keep up the good work and check out mine... i got new ones

Good poem the ending could've have been stronger, but you young and it will get stronger. Good poem 5/5.