Comments : This will be the slow but sure death of me

  • 19 years ago

    by Char

    Jessi, first off, excellent poem... You have some great talent, keep it up... I'm not going to sit here and compliment your poem and then ask you to read mine, because I can tell that you are hurting insanely. I know how you feel, trust me, I'm 14 as well... Its like you try to explain yourself and explain whats going on, but people just shut you out, and you just go deeper and deeper until it feels like you can't be reached. Don't do anything drastic, please promise me this. I just had a friend try to kill herself, because she thought that nobody cared. Turned out that she just couldn't see all the people who cared, because some people just hide it more than others. So it seems as if some people care, but they just have their own way of showing it. Let me just tell you, I have never personally met you, but I care so much for you, and I'm giving you my shoulder to cry on and you can vent on me or whatever you want. If you ever need to talk, email me at Theguitarteen2000@yahoo.com or if you have AIM I am Theguitarteen.... I know that you are depressed, but don't lose hope. There are people who want to get you out of this, because they understand how bad it is... I'm willing to do whatever I can possible...

  • excellent poem and totally can feel wat ur going through just holla at me
    Dee