The guy from Ice-cream store...

by metuka   Jun 14, 2005


You used to work at the sweetest place in the town
But you're gone, this place looks different now
I do remember your blue eyes
And smile that was so kind and nice
I was too shy to tell
My true feelings, it was like hell
You're leaving far away
And you'll forget me for a day
I thought we have all the time in the world
I was so wrong
The time passed
Like we didn't have it at all
And I don't want you to go
Without know:
That I LOVE YOU!...

I will miss you...

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  • 19 years ago

    by avery

    I love it how you can give away so much detail in your poems.
    But it's still not a lot of writing.
    It gives the reader a visual of the story you're telling.
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    FANTASTIC! I really love this. Short, but oh so sweet. I love the first two lines; they are excellent. Awesome job. 5/5 forsure.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholle

    I really like the begininning of this poem. keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    thats kool

  • 19 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    great write dont ya hate that when u like a guy and they dont know how ya feel!

    thanks so much for r/c on my poem!

    love always

    Natalie

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