by Ed Jun 15, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The wind kicks a little, |
by tender69
love the last stanza,really brings the poem together!i would have to say you do have some time problems(making the poem flow rythmically) but other than that great rhyming!i normally don't do this ,but i realize you are interesting in WW2 so please read my poem German Soldiers,i'm sure you'll love it.come talk poetry sometime,i'd love to! |