I don't think that love is fair,
cause you know I love you, but you don't seam to care.
And if I can't live my life with you,
I really don't want to make it true.

But I just have to let you go,
But remember in your heart, that I
loved you so!

awsome writing kristine, but seems a litte confusing, but i guess that is a part of beeing in love.. hehe

on the one side you are saying i cant live without you, and on the other you are letting him go... why??

well written though. kind regards kane

Thank you very much for the comments:D The poem is dedicated to a boy i was in love with. Kane says that love is confusing, and so it is. The boy could never by mine of different reasons. Thats why i had to let him go. Though i couldnt live whitout him, i did... I got over him, and found a new confusing love. Cause thats a part of loving... Hope you read my comment Kane.... Kind regards Kristine

it seems you are carrying a few scars thoug kristine, most of your poems seem to be about heatbrake and sorrow, or bloodshead without anyone caring.. can relate to how you feel though, because i have experienced the same! had an awsome girlfriend once, but i messed things up.. didnt realise how much i needed her untill afterwards, got so desperate and frustrated trying to win her back.. ended up doing my own version of the scene from "love actuall", if you have seen it, then its the part where he goe;s up to her door with the signs.. did it in the snow, and the freezing cold, waiting for 2 hours, just standing outside her window waiting for her to come.. awsome poem kristine, a little depressing though.. thaks for your comment by the way, best regards, from kane x

hope to hear from you soon :) best regards, kane

Thanx for u comment..
I liked this poem so much,it's nice..
read my other poems,maybe u like them..
ba bye :)

Omg this poem was totally true! love is so unfair... and confusing! i think this os one of your best! they way you got your point across in words was great. i love your poems!

~April~