Comments : Life and Pain

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi Ren,

    I've written a few poems with a really similar theme to this; the idea of lying awake at night and being tempted or harassed by demons and ghosts who would steal your pure and happy thoughts and lead you down a path of misery!
    A dark piece, but one - ultimately - laced with stubborn hope!
    All the best and I hope you are well,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Hi Ben,

      Thanks so much for your insightful comment :)
      You always nail the emotions portrayed on the head.
      I appreciate your kind words and hope you are doing well, too.

      Take care,
      Ren