great poem! i like it-like it! you're very thoughtful! 25/5

Wow that was really good.. i love your writing!!!

Very nice plot..all of yours seem to hav interesting plots... i love the way u write...its very different and messy but in a good way..great job jennifer.
love ya lots,
sore

Woiw, vivid and exciting, great job.

your servant:
david

I really liked this one it had a great flow and I liked the words that you used. 5/5