by crystal Jun 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Everyone always says |
by amelia
This is a clever poem... written in a nice way.. |
by Princess09
I like it its good but doesnt have sumptin i dont no wut buit yeah lol sry not tryin to b rude |
by nikki
I like this poem cuz it has lots of emotion and feeling and its just good 5/5. |
i liked it but it needs a stronger ending |
by Lisa
There doesn't seem to be much struture, but rhyme or not it flows pretty well, I like this type of poem, like you're just writing out your feelings as they come... Keep up the good works. :) |