Nice poem! it flowed nicely and it is something a lot of people can relate to!! 5.5

Cute poem! I LIKED IT

I think that there are places in this poem where the rhythm seems to falter. Also there seems to be some punctuation missing i.e. commas. However the concept works well.

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Nicely written, it flowed nicely and you kept it really intesting! good job! i give 5/5! btw, nice picture of ginobili! he's really awesome! haha

Wow. This was really nice...It can also be symbolic too...and that is what is good. I thought about it as you were going too fast with your relationship and your love or ring went down the drain. lol. it was still good. xxx

hehehe. good. no deep meaning. it shuld be under the funny catagory tho. 5/5