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by disasterpiece00   Jun 15, 2005


Your cold eyes
sink into my heart
all I wanted was one last breathe,
to tell you what I really think of you.
Sharp pins enter my heart.
now it's my turn to tear you apart.
what the h#ll did I say?
What the h#ll is wrong with me?
I am no longer alive.
I seem to have a black heart.
I seem to have lost the abilty of breathing.
Why the h#ll aren't I bleeding?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    This was great. pure emotion. thanks for your comment on my poem! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    that was pretty good
    keep writing!!!
    4/5

    Unloved ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    This is good...very good actually! 5/5 I especially love the first 2 lines! Beautiful...thanx 4 the comment on my l8est poem...i apreciate it! Hope 2 C more from u. Welcome 2 the site! Take Care, Peace! //ari\\

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