This is good...very good actually! 5/5 I especially love the first 2 lines! Beautiful...thanx 4 the comment on my l8est poem...i apreciate it! Hope 2 C more from u. Welcome 2 the site! Take Care, Peace! //ari\\

that was pretty good
keep writing!!!
4/5

Unloved ♥

This was great. pure emotion. thanks for your comment on my poem! xxx