Thts reli good , and reli deep i agree good job.
If u get the chance plz comment and vote on some of mi work

I don't like the format of this poem, but I guess I can syay the content is good. At first sight I didn't really want to read this poem because it just looked like a big bunch of messy text all over the place. I'm not trying to be rude. Sorry if I am being too truthfull.

*truthful

Sorry, I never said why, I don't think that the text should reach from one side all the way to the other side the majority of the poem..thats just me though.

Lol, hey you never have to worry about being too truthful im a big girl and i can handle what you have to say i rather you be honest than lie. so thanks for the comments.