hi i love this poem too thanks so much for the comment
you are right its not my best
take care
hs

Good use of words and i think that it is very well done, i am more used to this type of poetry from you. I think you did a good job on this one.

Five/Five.

P.S. i said no offense....thank you as always for commenting on my poems.

Beautifully done, Heather. You truly are so talented and I hope you know how much I love your work. You are truly the queen of poetry. hugs, love, Ann

Wow, another brilliant poem! This is another one of my favorites by you!! It's so well written, it really captures the essence of the writer! Well done~Holly

Aww Heather I am so so sad you feel that way...Any sweet, kind hearted, beautiful woman like yourself does NOT and i will repeat..does NOT deserve to be hurting..But you my friend have faith and are one of the strongest people I know..I know you can pull through whatever is troubling you right now...Much love to you always Heather
~Chelsey~

great poem! 5/5 take care!

PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

hey this was really good. it said alot without acctually saying it. 5/5
*gumdrop*

Such a beautiful sadness, written with the style and touch of your romantic blend.

Beautifully sad write Heather, hang in there, have faith......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

nice poem, enjoyed the imagery it set out.

I love it! Good job!

xoxoRach

Heather...this is a beautiful poem. I am so glad to have finally gotten to it. I won't be home until 12:00am tomorrow morning...so that means I won't be able to get online until possibly tomorrow...I'm sorry we can't talk more. I hope to get a computer at the aprt. soon. Ttyl, girl. Love ya lotz;) tata

Eden

Really good job.It was written really well. plz comment and vote on a few of mine

Strong Poem! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

This is a great poem. love the analogy of art compairing it to yourself. keep it up. check out my poem, Robert [[again]], and tell me what you think. i like how u are blunt.