by Dark Savior
This is a poem about the Woman i am dating at the moment...she is someone who is truely special, different from all the rest. |
Aww. I'm so very happy for you Shaun... and this is a major step up from the depressing poems lol. But heh, just one question... why did you lose your name in the poem ... isn't that like sacrificing yourself?...that seemed a lil off, but anyhow, nicely done. |
Is this the EMMA that is on here? Just curious. Great write and keep up the great work! |
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by Noelle k.
aww this is a really sweet poem i love it along with all your work. |
*sigh* True love is so sweet. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
I think it would be easier to follow if you broke down in to longer stanzas.But maybe that's just me. But it was a beautiful poem though.Great word choice.Good flow.5/5 |