holy shit ashley it sounds like ur trying to cut. hope it's just in the poem. anyways it was good 5/5 had a lot of feeling in it.
tiffy

Full of sadness! You paint the picture in such a creative way. Short but you expressed a lot using only a few words. Take Care! Brooke~

Oh i like it a lot. did you know 'I'm starting to think that 6 feet isn't that far' is also from a creed song? its a good poem btw :D