nice work! it holds so much meaning.. keep writing and always follow your heart

*jackie*

Expressive, it needs a bit more sprit in there, you know a bit more life and spruce... Good usage of words none the less... Continue to write - KEEP AT IT!

-Lyd

Nice job! Like the poem. Keep writing & if u get a chance check out my poems too. Cheers!

I'm not a spiritual person, but it's good none-the-less.

aw i totaly like this one