You're poem was good. I wanted to thank you for that incredible comment you gave me. You said something about how it would take you along time to reach my level of writing. It means alot to me. The only advice that I have for you is that you should add more to them. But I like them just the way the are too :-)

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

The pie part makes it cuter! teehee...

well, its really good, lots of good words.

read mine sometime myb? Smiles to you!

Thanks again for all your comments, it really makes me feel like i belong somewhere

Wow. are u okay?
it's beautiful & sad at the same time.
i hope everythings alright
5/5 for sure
bye, take care

pili

Very good poem life sucks huh