Short but good! 5/5
its really sweet..

thank all of u for your comments
much love to u all
jay

p.s let me know if u want me to read some of your poems, ill be happy to rate them:)

what happened..like did ur g/f break up w/ you..or did u lose someone?? this is a really good poem though!! like the rest of yours! keep in touch!!
-meg'n