No one

by daniel   Jun 16, 2005


If I died would any one miss me
Then they’d wished they could hug and kiss me
Now that I lay dead
When they found me in that puddle of red

With the razor in my hand
The mark from the rubber band
How could I have done this?
To think that no one would miss

Well it’s your fault too
What else was I to do?
Hide behind fake smiles
When no ones looking let the tears run for miles

No ones ever around
No one heard me hit the ground
No one missed me
No one was there to see

The pain in my eyes
When I said I was all right
No one knew those were lies
Now that I’m gone I’ll never see light

Just wander through the darkness
Seeking the protection and love
Feeling only pain and sadness
Never seeing below or above

No one noticed I was gone
When they did they weren’t sad
They shook their heads saying, “Where did he go wrong?”
It wasn’t me it was you that’s why I’m mad

It’s always me
When it’s plain to see
Its their fault not mine
Even I’m dead they blame me all the time

I only have one thing to say
I loved you and gave you my all
But what I got back was pain
So to you I give credit for my fall………

Please comment this is my first poem from the heart and i need to know what you poets think.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    I would miss you, i would miss you! don't make that mistake..please

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I loved the beginning and the flow was just wonderful.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by LovelessAndConfused

    That was great 5/5
    Keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Miss Lovely

    Damn thats good.

  • 19 years ago

    by TheDevilHerself

    Aww i would care if u were gone...hell i would anyway awesome poem...u really r very good at poetry u should keep going. luv ~*naomi*~